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A.P. Murphy's avatar

It would be so weird to be on a space vessel hurtling through the void on a journey to somewhere that may be nowhere and we didn't even know whether we'd get there before we died.

Oh, wait...

Keith Long's avatar

Dude what this is so good. It doesn't lean on the SciFi, but its perfectly fit to it this is real good

James Worth's avatar

thank you so much Keith, this truly means a lot to me. appreciate you reading<3

Saint-Lazare's avatar

So many amazing sentences and loved the subtle dystopian concept!

Caroline Osella   (they/them)'s avatar

Moved to melancholy for these people. Beautifully sketched with such economy.

Alex Shifman's avatar

It strikes me as the sort of thing God would take like spit hurled in His faceless face.

Ooof

Nick Winney's avatar

[is there a missing "tell" in the last para, mr Worth?]

Nick Winney's avatar

one of those..."what if X" explorations made beautifully human, with all the sci fi outside a briefly-passed window.

excellent. 🫡

ZLL's avatar

Weird and sad and beautiful

troy adkins's avatar

this reminds me of marshall's shroom trip

Dylan Michael Julian's avatar

I looove the way you write, James!