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That was fantastic. Your use of language is gorgeous. Also, as a person who lives in Georgia, I appreciate the setting.

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thank you so much, I’m so glad you’re enjoying! I’ve only been to Georgia a couple of times but I really was enamored, I hope I’m doing it justice!

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Let me know if you have any Georgia specific questions I can help with!

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Hooked! Great characters. Love the descriptions. So glad there's more! This is true, but they'll stay in the swamp where they belong if you throw them hot dogs or kibble: “Ma says gators get bored and like to go places and that they eat twelve year old boys who don’t eat their corn.”

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Thank you kindly for tuning in! I hope you enjoy the rest as well(:

And good to know, I gotta start carrying some kibble with me, it seems…

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Handy, I know... Made it halfway through ch 3 last night. Love it so far!

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Very good read so far.

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Thank you so much, makes me so happy to hear! Hope you enjoy the rest(:

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so many beautiful passages and sharp characters here, but the misunderstanding springsteen went straight to my heart

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Aw shucks, thank you, EJ! it’s always the most gutting thing when the working class misunderstands a Springsteen working class anthem, I wish this were purely fiction in that regard :/

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Love the part when Beaver takes the pot off his head. Goddamn in the feels

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Not truck playin bruce springsteen 😂

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truck be like

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